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Empty sky,
But for thoughts of one,
All alone.
this is a new style of poetry (i think!) that i have been working on. It is like a hiaku but with 2 less syllables per line(3-5-3 instead of 5-7-5). It was actually more of a test to see how much could be expressed in an even smaller size than a hiaku. Enjoy!
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NicKmiLLard's avatar
short but sweet, great job, keep up the good unique work :-)